1
Write one useful promise
Open with the problem: a crowded desk makes daily items hard to find. Outline three specific fixes—clear the surface, group essentials, and assign a place for loose items. Cut any line that does not help deliver that promise.
2
Match each line to a shot
Pair the opening with a cluttered-desk view, then use close-ups of each change. Show hands or objects rather than a presenter. If a proposed visual does not clearly demonstrate the line, replace the visual or rewrite the line.
3
Review the complete Reel
Read the captions at phone size, listen to narration against any music, and check that the final desk view reflects the three fixes. End with one relevant question instead of adding a second topic.